The ending is too abrupt
hello sukshma garu i loved ur writing, the point is amazing infact which is true (father’s attraction towards his daughter) and i liked the way u ended the story, i thought u may end it in a filmy way lik Ratnam gatting married but it was different. wht r ur other writings , this is the first time i came across a writer lik u good work keep it up plz let me knw ur other writings eager to read ur other stories too. take care n wish u all the best.
hiii 🙂 🙂 sukshma hw r u ? getng strong feelng tht i heard ur name b4 nway i likd ur story n it was gud to read abt u n ur grandpa , very less people share tht kind closeness with their grandpa’s . i hav a suggestion 4u hope u lik it , y cant u write a story abt u n ur grandpa out of ur experiences n u can ad sum kind of incidents wch didnt tak place . believe me if u write a buk abt u n ur grandpa it wil b a hit . thank u .
Hey vedere gud 1 ya . nice liked ur story keep it up . waitng to read more gud n meaningful stories from u . take care have fun .
hello sukshma your story ‘MACHA’
hello sukshma your story ‘MACHA’ is very good n that’s very true , you wrote what is happening in our society. Infact 2 days back there was news about a man who was raping his daughter since she was 14 and as a result she became mother of 2 , unfortunately his wife and son became mute spectators , they are helpless and what shocking is her husband also became mute spectator because of fear for his father – in – law . felt very bad , upset, angry but what to do . anyway i heard about your writing through a friend . and your ‘REMINISCENCES’ is also very good . good going .
It is quite unfortunatethat the very father who is the cause for the birth of his daughter entertained an evil thought of molesting his own daughterin his ripe old ageI wonder the influence of westren society may have inspired Sukshma to write such an incident.The wise writer ended the story making the father realising his animal instinct
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